48. Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
今年發的模擬題目與以往的餅圖都是類似的來考察特點。拿到一個題目還是先要進行圖片文字部分的閱讀,本年的題目還是要求兩個部分,同學們可以分為三段來進行寫作:圖畫描述段、分析論證段和趨勢預測段。首先第一段的寫作思路遵循整體五句話的寫作思路:直觀評價、圖表標題、主流趨勢、最大變化和過渡句。首先直觀評價是最簡單的一句,可以說這是一個簡潔又準確的表格等,同學們可以適當的更改自己的語言。第二句圖表標題依然采用倒魚鉤的翻譯方法,圖表標題是“過敏傾向的閱讀形式的調查”,可以翻譯為“the construction form of national reading tendency”,主流趨勢是餅圖的特點,即整體而言有幾部分構成,并且哪部分是最大的占比,首先所有指數的是“國民傾向的閱讀形式”,那最大差異怎么描述呢?其實本題餅形圖的五個數據,同學們描述最大的占比例的就可以,但是注意本短些什么現象就主要在下文分析這種現象產生的原因,最后過渡句比較好寫,只需要說上述現象值得我們進一步的分析就可以了。在第二段時注意分析上文最大差異產生的原因,這個圖主要分析拿一本紙質書閱讀的原因,可以從紙質書有更好的收藏價值、更多人認為無法取代紙質書的角度分析。最后一段進趨勢預測,直接寫這種趨勢將會持續下去就可以了,那么基于以上思路,我們來看一下范文:
Here is a pie chart, clear and accurate. It goes without saying that the chart records that the construction form of national reading tendency, which successfully arouse our curiosity. As is clearly reflected by the chart, the national reading form is composed of several totally different portions, embodying book reading, online reading, cell-phone reading, electronic devices reading and reading by printing from online. From the statistics given, we may draw the conclusion that the percentage of book reading is the highest among the five categories and gains approximately 66.0%.
Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the trend that book reading shares the most important part, but for my part, the following two are the most important. On the top of list is that paper books are more convenient to make notes while reading. So long as you regards this analysis reasonable, I may go further. Another special consideration in this case is that paper books are worthy collecting in many peoples’ eyes.
Taking into account what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the current situation will continue in the forthcoming years.