當向考官說明后,要做到有理有據,所以再舉一個例子加以說明。說完之后,剛才提到,我們之所以說這些優點,是因為這些優點對于考研來說是有幫助的,所以,當舉例之后,還要說說這樣的優點對自己產生了什么樣的積極影響,對于考研有什么幫助。最后再總結一下。所以整個的思路為:1.position(定位)2.examples(舉例)3.positive influence on you(對你的積極影響)4.conclusion(總結)。
下面我們結合一篇范文,看看具體的語言表達。
As for my strongest strength, I think it is my carefulness and responsibility in work and study, which promote me unceasingly devote myself to my work.(定位)
A case in point is that during a bid for a road project, we spent 10 days preparing for the job and everyone was very tired. It was already four o'clock AM. And they all planned to have a rest, but I insisted on a final confirmation of the tender.
When doing that, suddenly I found that they had written the numbers oppositely. But when I told them about the mistake, they thought that I was young without any experience,and they could not have made mistakes. To persuade them,I had to take out the original documents. By comparing the two documents, finally they believed that it was a mistake. And we corrected it together. At last, we succeeded.(舉例)
Through this matter, I find that carefulness and responsibility are very important. And I also stick to them in the following work.(積極影響)