2019考研英語(一)真題答案大作文：堅持

考研英語真題答案來源：文都教育 2018-12-22　

【題目】

52. Directions:

Write an essay of 160-180 words based on the following picture.

In your essay, you should

1) describe the picture briefly.

2) interpret its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

【參考范文】

The cartoon provides us with a thought-provoking scene: two men are climbing a hill, but one of them desires to give up due to tiredness, while the other one encourages him to keep going.

Undoubtedly, the cartoonist aims at reminding us of the significance of persistence. At the top of the list, we should attach importance to perseverance mainly due to that it can enable us to ameliorate ourselves so we can be qualified for future career promotion, and be ready for meeting the forthcoming challenges.What’s more, we ought to place a high value on the role played by persistence in personal growth. Put it another way, in this ever-changing world, perseverance is to personal growth what water is to fish. To sum up, if persistence misses our attention in any possible way, we will suffer a great loss beyond imagination.

Hence, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from the above cartoon. For one thing, we should frequently use it to enlighten the young. For another, we should cultivate the awareness of teenagers that it is very vital to keep going toward our goals. Only by doing so, can we become winner in the face of difficulties.

【參考范文譯文】

這個漫畫給我們呈現了一個發人深思的情景：兩人正在爬山，但是其中一個人因為疲勞想要放棄，而另一個人鼓勵他繼續下去。

毫無疑問，圖畫的作者旨在提醒我們堅持重要性。首先，我們應該重視堅持，主要是因為堅持可以讓我們完善自身，這樣我們未來才有資格得到職業生涯的進步，才能做好準備迎接以后的挑戰。另外，我們也應該重視堅持在個人成長方面的作用。在這個多變的時代，堅持對于個人成長就像水對于魚一樣重要。換言之，如果我們以任何可能的形式忽視堅持，我們將遭受非常巨大的損失。因此，從以上圖畫中得出積極的含義非常重要。一方面，我們應該經常用它來啟迪年輕人。另外一方面，我們應該培養青少年重視堅持的意識。只有這樣，我們才能成為困難面前的贏家。

【題目點評】

一方面，“堅持”這個話題可以說是考研英語寫作傳統話題，早在2004年就考過堅持題材的漫畫：“終點又是新起點”，今年的考題再次驗證反復研讀真題的重要性;另外，堅持話題宏觀上屬于個人成功品質類話題。另一方面，這次作文的難點主要集中在圖畫描述和主題詞的書寫上，只要考前安心備考的同學都能順利作答。整體而言，2019考研英語(一)大作文屬于難度適中的題目。

我們在寫作的時候，要學會用適當的表達方式去進行同義替換。不要看到“我認為”，滿腦子都是“i think”，這樣的文章，閱卷老師可能只想給你及格分。我們可以多積累一些同義詞，既可以替換掉腦子中的低階詞匯，又能保持句子的多樣性，這樣更容易拿高分