It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.
上面的例子是一個關于正面的話題,這是圍繞“愛心”展開的。因此,在這一段中,首先需要去弘揚這種美德,或者現象。在第三段的第一句,重申論點是非常有必要的。例如這句話“It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are”,為了使我們的社會更加美好,這樣積極正面的例子是我們每一個人都要效仿并學習的。在第三段的第二句中,需要表明“當前社會的確很需要這種正能量或者這種積極正面的行為”。正如第一個例子中的這句話“we should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers”,范文中再次表明社會中的每個人都應該隨時做好準備去幫助其他人。無論是作為我們的家人,還是陌生人,我們都不應該見他人有難而視而不見。在第三段的第三句中,文章應該“對未來的憧憬或者期待”進行表述。例如,“Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines”,針對這種正面行為或現象,如果一直保持著這種正能量,社會將會變得更美好,愛心的光將照亮悲傷的陰影。