In the picture above, we can see sb1 doing sth1, doing sth2, doing sth3. Meanwhile, sb2 is doing sth4, doing sth5, doing sth6, doing sth7. What impresses me most is that(本圖對比點) What a thought-provoking picture it is!
From my perspective, what the author want to convey is simple but of great wisdom.(寫出本圖核心含義). In the picture, sb would rather do sth1 than do sth2. The reason is simple: (分析深刻原因). However, if he could do sth2, it would be easier for him to enjoy his life/achieve his goal.
第三段:解決方案或我的觀點
第三段起總結作用,而最好的總結莫過于給出具體的行動建議和呼吁。注意以下兩點:
1. 行動建議;
2. 總結呼吁。
第三段可以這樣寫:
From this picture, I learn that we modern individuals are supposed to sth1 instead of doing sth2. Only in this way can we enjoy our life/achieve our success/avoid the similar mistakes just as the man/boy/horse in the picture.
完整范文如下:
In the above drawing appears (圖片主角). ____. How ironic/thought-provoking it is!On/Under the drawing there are some eye-catching words reading: ____.
This drawing expresses deep concern about ____. Nowadays, people enjoy an increasingly convenient/comfortable life brought by ____. Naturally, with living standards improving, people are in an increasing need for ____ to maintain their modern lifestyle. For example, people need ____. However, because of limited amount of ____, their increasing demand can not be satisfied. Therefore, ____ has finally emerged and,more annoyingly, consequent problems are becoming more and more serious. If no effective remedy were introduced, ____ would ____.
Efforts should be taken to avoid such a(n) disastrous/unfortunate effect.Firstly, ____. In addition, ____. Few things are impossible to diligence. By actively employing these methods, we can ensure a bright prospect.(可作為萬能結尾段)
注意第二段中出現的系列邏輯詞語:
... Naturally(表述產生過程), ... For example, ...However, ... Therefore, ... more annoyingly, ... If ...